KyleDartist's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Red]

Very nice for your forth animation, just needs a bit of cleaning around the edges in spots where white appears. If you look closely at her body you should be able to spot them.

plus your boob jiggle is out of sync with her pace, they should bounce with her steps not an expanding. The way it is now makes her look like here breasts are going to explode out of her top within a heartbeat.

Midgard229 responds:

Thanks! Actually it's my first flash animation. And ur right I was aware of those things but had to get it done before end of the day. The boobs only bounce right in first few steps. But thanks for the feedback!

[Lighting test]

Very nice loop and outstanding shading quality, gives it that real 'graphic novel' feeling.

Maybe have her push the triggers every once and awhile + change of facial expression? Just a thought about what you might want to test out next.

Maybe even include some alternate colors flashing on the screen, not epileptic style but enough to notice. :)

Keep up the good work!

[Jungly Cartoons]

Lots of simple smirk jokes, similar to saturday paper style comic strips as someone mentioned below. Animation style also simple but true to the comic strip style throughout.

Jokes are easily understandable, but seem to go over many people's heads.

[Epic pony space love]

ummmmm "it's" boobs are moving even when "it" isn't.... I find problem with this.

Scale sagging everywhere....

I just don't even know what to say anymore....

cuddlesthemighty responds:

When is it not moving, i watched it through and i make sure some part of 'it' is always moving. Unhelpful commenting is what killed Santa.

[Cute Explosion]

QUADRUPLE RAINBOW! *head explode*

Love the whol music vid, nice style, very fluid could be improved here and there but otherwise I beautiful little animation about never leaving your dogs laying around in your sceince lab.

[Obliteration]

Nice! As most of you work has been so far!

Hey I love your work, I'm a big fan of the whole flash character gone rampant idea and and as far as stick versions of the concept go I think yours have evolved into one of the best.
It's beautifully animated and practically flawless in it's own respects. I was just wondering if you've ever made any flash submissions that involved full form characters, and if so, do you think you could do the same with your main character?
Becuase I'm sure if you could pull off the same fuildity as you do with stick figures you'd do even better than you are now.
Just a thought I guess, I'm not asking for a change or anything becuase what you ha is great. :) Just wondering if YOU'VE thought of doing so.
That or if you know code have you tried working on a game? I'm sure that if you collabed w/ someone they'd be happy to help you with the code. XD If you don't know the gaming kind.
But then again I guess I'm rambling, good luck, and I'll enjoy seeing more of your work. :)

Tentionmaru responds:

thanks for the detailed review. I have worked with fullbody animation a bit. the only reason i have not made a dedicated flash to it lately is because it is incredibly time consuming when compared to sticks. still, it's on my agenda. I've put some thought into teaming up with a programmer to make a game as well.